Photo Credit @Madison Woods (Please accept my apologize for not giving credit to Madison Woods when this was first published.) I must have been distracted by the cowboy in my head.
Country Honey
It wasn’t my first taste of dust, been riding and roping since my third summer, but the trail was so much sweeter with you beneath me. My dad always said that there weren’t nothin’ finer than a willing mount and a good woman. I didn’t much understand my ol’ man but today he seemed to have the right of it. I was hungry and you were sweeter than country honey. I’m glad you didn’t pay your daddy no mind, sometimes a gal just needs to ride, fast and hard with the wind in her hair until she’s breathless.
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I like the voice of this
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Thanks Neil. I have deep American country roots.
Tracey
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I love the sense of freedom like you describe it.. The voice an perspective seem so genuine.
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I’m a country girl Bjorn. I’ve loved horses and cowboys.
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Love it, innuendos and all!
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I thought it was pretty obvious but innuendos do make us think.
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So I didn’t imagine the innuendo’s and I’m still an innocent child lol. Great take on the prompt.
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I’m sorry? I think my blog is rated PG at least. ha ha
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haha good thing we’re all adults here then anyway 🙂
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Not quite sure if it’s the willing mount or the good woman we’re talking about but I feel like I want to ride too! What an artful doctor!
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I think you do know, Perry.
Ride on,
Tracey
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Beautifully done. Tongue in cheek innuendo. 🙂
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.
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Breathily indeed.
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Breathless indeed was what I meant to say. I am on a very busy train, would prefer a different mount
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I always use the “busy train excuse” when I make a breathily typo. It’s difficult to type on horseback too. 😉 Thanks Mike.
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Great dialect! Your story could be describing the woman or the horse 🙂
Sometimes we only understand the things good ‘ol daddy said when we get a bit older.
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Indeed Ali. My Dad’s cowboy wisdom is always popping into my head. Thank you.
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Great voice! This really knocked it out, Doc.
You, ummm …WERE referring to a horse, yes? 😀
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No, a girls gotta ride!
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Either way you put it, I really like this story! Again, that voice works great!
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What a nice story about riding and horses and all things innocent 😉
Great voice and point of view!
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I don’t recall that it was very innocent. 😉
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There was nothing innocent about this… I loved it, Tracey!
The voice, the dialect, the sensuality… Sweet indeed!
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Thanks for the sweet comment Dale.
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Dear Dr, Tracey,
Love the voice and the…um…mounting pleasure. Ride-em cowgirl!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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They always say, “Write what you know,” and I know horses and cowboys.
Be well my friend.
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The innuendo, the comments, it totally cracks me up. Great writing, if you want to understand one thing, you can. If you don’t, you don’t have to. 😀
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So true, it’s all up to the reader after I release it into the universe.
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if this doesn’t speak of that elusive feeling of being free then i don’t know what it is. well done.
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Wild and free
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Smiling I am. You’ve taken on this personna so well. Love her voice — can see her ridin’ with the wind in her hair!
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I can feel the country girl coming out here, Tracey. Nice write.
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More innuendo.Amy?
I’m laughing,
Tracey
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hahaha
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Passionate piece. Well done!
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Thanks Madame. I’m glad you felt it.
Tracey
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This made me sit up and take notice. Lets hope this ride lasted longer than 8 seconds. 🙂
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ha ha I imagine if it was a first time for the cowboy then 8 seconds would have been a long ride.
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Great country descriptions, Tracey. 🙂 — Suzanne
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The authenticity comes from my country roots. Thank you Patricia.
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It reads like poetry. And the title, so beautiful! 🙂
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