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Paper Days
By T. Delaplain
You folded the fuselage into a triangle then tightened the binder paper into a nose. You licked a finger and raised it to the sky; a northern breeze, good visibility. Precise dirt smudged creases, torn into perfect straight lines, you fashioned the wings to maximize lift.
“A fan tail?” I suggested.
“Girls,” you shook your head, “No.”
Rushing the launch, you cocked your arm, took aim and let it soar.
“Jump on,” you roared. We raced the wind, me on the handle bars and you at the helm. I felt your lips brush my shoulder and we were both breathless.
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A 102 word story about fragile young love and paper planes. Oh to be twelve again when all things were possible. We were pilots and princesses, fireman and doctors. Let your imagination soar and join us at Friday Fictioneers.
A beautiful image of childhood glee. loved it. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you for the comment and thank you for the prompt. Bikes feel like summer to me.
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Loving that where we live now, the parking lot is filled with kids on scooters/bikes/trikes. Gotta drive slowly and keep an eagle eye out for the little ones. 🙂
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Beautiful image of childhood. Thanks for the memories recalled.
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Thank you Michael . Childhood memories are the best.
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that captures the atmosphere so well, Tracey
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Thanks Neil.
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Dear Tracey,
Delightful snippet of coming of age. So well written I forgot I was reading.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m so glad. Did you feel the wind in your hair? I did. Salud
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I could definitely feel it. 😉
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This line ~ Precise dirt smudged creases ~ brought a tear. Reminder of childhood gone? Wanting to have a “do over” with someone special? Well done, my dear. And the title is spot on!
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I always had dirt smudged hands myself and made my own airplanes but no real boy to chase back then. I waited for Tom who I met at 17 and we are still together today.
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LOVED this! I’m grinning ear to ear.
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I’m so glad. Thanks for the lovely compliment.
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A great way to celebrate the prompt. Magical, almost.
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First kiss? Magical.
Thanks Sandra.
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This brought back memories of early flirtations and a crush on a red-haired girl. Breathless was the perfect word choice.
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Yes, breathless says it all. I hope you are still breathless over a girl.
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I am. I married a seventeen-year-old as well. That was forty-two years ago. She’s still got it.
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I could feel the magic …. and the breathlessness 🙂
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I’m glad you stopped by and thank you. Childhood should be magical.
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Fun and freedom. Lovely!
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Thanks Ali. I wish every child could be wild and free.
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So much magic in this story. His lips brushed her shoulder, I felt her tingle in response.
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I’m so glad. Those little shivers are the best.
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oh yes, to be young again… i loved the way you laid out this story. simply beautiful.
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Just a little breath of summer for you.
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Just a breath away from a kiss.
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The best kind. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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This is lovely – you express such innocent happiness very well.
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Thanks Clare.
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That’s a wonderful story, the excitement when childhood changes into something else.
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Thank you
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Thanks for the ride, Tracey! I love this. The last two lines are just perfect. Racing the wind, indeed. That’s a reason to do your childhood all over again.
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