PHOTO PROMPT submitted by Courtney Wright. Photographer prefers to remain anonymous
Reading Between the Lines
By T. Delaplain
Dear Trace,
I cain’t get away this summer for a visit. Fox says the price of gas is gonna keep climbing. Ol’ Doc King gave me a new heart medicine, expensive, but I guess I need it. They opened a new Wally World in Bozeman. It’s the damnedest thing, you can buy a month’s worth of canned chili for a couple of bucks. Sure glad duct tape was on sale. I been needing a few repairs.
I’ve enclosed a hundred for the boys to split, I know Pat needs it more for that fancy college but it ain’t fair to only give one grandson money.
Love,
E
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Write us a 100 word letter at Friday Fictioneers, the duct tape is optional.
Is duct tape an American thing? Just curious. There’s nothing that can’t be fixed with duct tape and determination.
I rarely write directly from the photo prompt or explain my fiction but here’s my thought process.
I’m sure I once saw these boots next to my Dad’s garden. His voice was clearly in my head. I was recently de-cluttering and found a few letters from my Dad written on scraps of paper, which inspired this imaginary composite of those letters.
Hunger has a solution.
Knowing my father, he would have bought 10 cans of chili and left 5 at the Senior Center. He grew a garden and fished for trout all summer but rarely ate any of it. His neighbors were blessed with his generosity.
If you feel inspired by reading between the lines please consider making a donation to a local food bank because there are good people everywhere who can’t even afford a week’s worth of canned chili.
We call it gaffer tape. Great story, Tracey
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Actually, we call it gaffer tape here, too, Neil. Gaffer tape is more refined and not quite as gooey as duct tape. The former is quite a bit more expensive as well.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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If duct tape won’t work here in the West, we go directly to baling wire.
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I’m a big fan of baling wire too. If you can’t fix it with duct tape and baling wire, it’s time to throw it away.
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Insignificant trivia: I once hemmed a dance dress with gaffer tape. Held through several numbers. 😜
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Gaffer tape? Good to know. When I was a kid I thought it was duck tape because it quacks when you pull it off of the roll. Thanks Neil.
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Love stories with letters! Your dad sounds like a very generous man! ❤
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He was Courtney in a very understated way. Thank you for the prompt and for a few more minutes with my Dad.
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Great voice Tracey. The rise of use and need of food banks is fairly recent in the UK, and a sad reflection of society at the moment.
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I hate that anyone goes hungry in this world of abundance and abundance of waste. Thanks Iain.
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Dear Tracey,
Love the character, the voice and the sentiment. Well done
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you. My passion is fighting hunger. I like to think I learned that from my father’s random acts of kindness.
La paz to you as well.
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I like the story. Our local food pantry unfortunately does a lot of business. They do get a lot of donations, but it is sad that so many people need their services.
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It is sad. We were poor but never hungry. My Dad worked 2-3 jobs to keep us fed so I also understand about “pulling yourself up by your boot straps”. I don’t believe that anyone wants to go to a food bank or a soup kitchen. Stuff happens.
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From all you’ve written your father sounds like a remarkable man.
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I love the voice of the MC. This is a sad story, though, reflecting the deep need of so many.
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Thank you
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Great voice with sympathetic tones and wonderfully written
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Thank you
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What a heartwarming story and thanks for sharing about your Dad. What a lovely man he sounded like. Lovely tale
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Thank you Lynn.
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My pleasure 🙂
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We have duct tape too. I always make sure to have some in the house, just in case 🙂
I love the letter format. And I’d like to know where I can buy that cheap chilli!
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Duct tape is always in the house. Thanks Ali. Cheap canned chili, not recommended.
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Delightfully different in content and format.Love it.
My FriFic tale is called Jim and Jan!
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Thanks Keith. I just popped over to your newish blog. And I was able to comment!
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Oh Tracey! This was great. So much going on in such a few lines… and then the money when it’s clear he has little. Well done
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My dad would give me a hundred dollars when I’d come home from college and it was sometimes the only thing between me and eating dollar chili for weeks. He transferred that giving to my sons when they went to college even though my sons were never in any danger of starvation. My dad had an 8th grade education but understood the value of college.
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Wow I love him! What a good heart
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You told this with a great voice.
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Thanks
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Really great story.
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Thanks Lisa, glad you stopped by.
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I loved the epilogue as much as the story, Tracey. Several of the stories this week have reminded me of my own dad. These people were recycling, reusing, and repurposing before those words were ever coined.
I have also found (from personal experience and observation) that those with the least are often the most generous. God Bless them every one.
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Thank you Russell
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Your father sounds like a wonderful, generous person. Your story is lovely, reminding us that there are many who don’t have enough and those who struggle to make it on what they have. But he gave anyway, from what little he had. For the duct tape, my dad (in Ohio) has always said, “All ‘ya need is a roll of duct tape, you can fix anything.”
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Thanks Brenda.
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Wonderful voice!
And I love your postscript.
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Thanks Dawn.
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Generosity deserves its own reward. A story that reflects real life, enjoyed reading.
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Thanks James, this was an actual slice of my elderly father’s former life. No complaints, just working things out.
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Wonderfully done, Tracey. The less they have, the more they give.
Loved learning about your dad, too…
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Thanks Dale
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I love the generosity of your grandmother. Fair all the way around even if her heart medicine is costly.
We have what is called The Giving Box near our cluster mailboxes. People leave non-perishables, and those in need come take them. We also have a community cupboard filled with all kinds of food and cleaning supplies, diapers, shampoo and … It’s “manned” once a week and anyone in the community can come get what they need, no questions asked. Super cool idea!
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I love that idea. Thanks for dropping by.
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Always a pleasure. Too bad we can’t pull out some cookies and tea, or a good bottle of wine, depending on the time of day.
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EXCELLENT take on the photo prompt – thank you for sharing!
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Thank you Donna. Drop by any time.
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We call it by it’s look: silver tape… and I always bring it with me when out travelling… marvelous stuff that can be used for repair… I do love your story about the sacrifice made despite the problem he’s having…
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Thank you Bjorn. That’s a good tip, to travel with a roll of tape. Fix a hem, tie someone up, repair a suitcase, fix a broken car part. Brilliant.
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A beautiful story about your father, and yes, people who have little are the ones who often share freely. With riches comes greed, I think. We do have duck tape here, but it’s not a common household item and rather expensive (the metallic, stick to everything kind). We have all kinds of tapes for different purposes that are more common but usually less sticky.
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Thank you
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Good for the giver – give to both of them! Nice story!
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A whole pile of information in your wonderfully creative story. I loved it.
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