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Mo Fhioghrá
by T. Delaplain
Willing to take the beatin’ that would come later, Aidan laid his chin against his gobshite brother’s favorite fiddle. Catching the eye of the barkeep, he nodded, requesting a pint. The bartender flashed him the finger and mouthed feke off.
He’d only get the one chance to score before the band retook the stage. He pulled the bow across the strings and the violin began to sing. Caitlin glided towards the stage like a silkie carrying a pint of Guinness.
“Slainte Aidan, stop acting the maggot and g’wan and play.”
“This one is for herself, mo fhíoghrá, my one true love.”
Join the craic at Friday Fictioneers. Rochelle will give you 100 words to make some music. Start with something easy like The Fields of Athenry or The Swallow Tail Jig. In celebration, let’s raise a pint together and thank Rochelle for hosting this ceili. If I’ve offended any of my Irish cousins with my appropriation of your slang, get on with yourself, it’s all in good fun. Drink up.
I don’t know Irish slang so it all just worked as a bar scene and a die hard musician.
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Perhaps this is just any pub on any given night. Thanks for reading and commenting. Much obliged.
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Atmospheric, Tracey. I could smell the place
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Stale Guinness and fags
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I could hear this one.
A sweet Irish tune.
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Aye, it was a grand performance. I’m hoping he gets the lass as well.
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This could have been my pub on one of my regular Irish nights!
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And I would have enjoyed a pint with you
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You caught the Irish very well. Now I want to go back!
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I haven’t been back since 2012 but my roots reach all the way to Ireland.
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County Tipperary for me. Great Grandma Bell.
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Great great grandfather Michael Tracey Lane from Co Cork
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I want to be in the place joining them! Great stuff!
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Thanks Iain
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One of those stories that has to be read out loud… lol, I can get the accent better when I say than when I read it. Fun story. Hope it was worth the beatin’ he’ll get from his brother…
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You’re right. It’s even better with my terrible Irish accent. Ha ha
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And my pretend Irish accent is awful!
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Not a bit offended, Lass.
I love listening to poems read by a proper Irish actor (man or woman). The story makes sense, ye know. We love a good donnybrook. 🙂
I have read about how to do this (speaking and writing). I can’t. Well done.
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Thank ya kindly sir
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i’d been to a couple of pubs while in ireland, and based on my experience, you caught the atmosphere of the place right. well done. 🙂
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Great atmosphere created, Ireland is such a great place especially for the ‘crack’ 😊
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I agree. Thank you
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Dear Tracey,
Can’t say I understood it all but I got the gist of it. At any rate I could feel the atmosphere. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Boy wants the girl, it’s the same in every language.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Thanks to google translate, I understood it. Lovely story, I hope he gets the success he yearns for and no beating.
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I suspect this one is accustomed to the beatings.
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Love it. The sounds really sang in this one. A great moment.
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Thanks Laurie
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Good dialogue and great pacing. I can see it in my head.
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I can still smell the stale beer myself. Thanks for reading.
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You’re welcome, Tracey.
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I hope he gets his chance to show his stuff while his brother is looking the other way…and gets the girl too! Nicely done, Tracey. 🙂
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I suspect he has the gift of the gab and the luck of the Irish.
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With that much talent, it’s a shame he doesn’t have his own violin. May he have the luck of the Irish 🙂
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I don’t actually know if he’s talented but he seems lucky. Ha ha
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The vibe, slang, and ambiance are all very cool. I’m sure it will be well worth the beating if all goes well. This is my favorite part though, “If I’ve offended any of my Irish cousins with my appropriation of your slang, get on with yourself, it’s all in good fun.” You just have to ignore those people who are looking for any excuse to be offended. If you offended them, you’ve made them very happy.
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