I’ve been lost in Baja, Mexico, enjoying the sun and sand, sometimes wasting paper writing tall tales, sometimes cooking for strays at MyBajaKitchen.com.
La Señora took a liking to Sarah’s photo and insisted on living another 100 words. Here’s her web of intrigue.
La Señora came to me at a run down clam shack; feet in the sand and tequila in hand. Any similarity to the real Señoras running drug cartels in Mexico is purely coincidental, entonce no le dispares al autor, por favor.
Pass me a lime and drop a comment below. Muchas gracias.

Always a Widow
by Tracey Delaplain
A tangled damp sheet tethered her escape. Acrid smoke swirled between them. Relaxed and languid, he never seemed to struggle.
“Who is the moth?” she toyed.
“Who is the flame?” he answered.
“It’s over you know? I sent the shipment last night. You missed it.”
“Did I? You seem certain.” he brushed off the silk she’d spun and exhaled. “There’s always another, Señora.”
“The Agency will have something to say about that.”
”Perhaps. Mas tequila?”
“Si, una vez más?” she suggested.
Pinning her to the mattress, he pulled the cocoon tighter.
Neither could control this web.
Join us at Friday Fictioneers. Rochelle will give you 100 words to capture us in the tangled web you weave. La Señora has commanded our attention in past stories from Baja. You can read more about her, if you dare, at Silenced, Vas Con Dios, Sweet Success
I am at peace here next to La Sierra Giganta mountains and the Sea of Cortes in Nopolo, BCS, MX.
And sometimes I write.
It seems they are both captured.
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Good to see you back again, Tracey
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Thanks Neil. I was lost for a few months.
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Good story. They are both captured and held. Love the photo of the lushness of the golf course contrasted against the starkness of the mountains behind.
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Mexico is a lesson in contrasts. Thank you Irene.
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So happy to find you here, Tracey!
Well done… They are indeed both trapped
(You have an errant “d” on struggle… 😉 )
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Glad to be found. Thank you. I published this with 3 typos. Arrrgh, such an amateur.
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Stop… you were just excited to play with us! And maybe you should share your tequila… 😉
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This one is bound to have a messy ending, but at least they’re having fun while it lasts! And thanks for making us jealous through those supers photographs 🙂
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Yes, La Señora leads a messy life but she might have met her match in this enemy. It’s just a glimpse of my beach life. Thank you
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it looks like the cycle should be broken, but how? it would take a lot of will and determination.
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I’m not sure that either of them wants to break free. Love is messy.
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Sounds like a dangerous liaison neither can escape. Nice one!
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Yes, the best kind of liaison
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Which of them will turn on the other first?
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I’m really not sure Iain. They never tell me in advance where they’re going.
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Beautifully done. You’ve not lost your touch in your absence.
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Thank you. I feel like I’ve been wasting my talents on writing about food. Narco intrigue is so much more fun.
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What a fun glimpse into their relationship. Who’s the moth and where’s the fire indeed. Good one.
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Lust and danger, an attractive combination.
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Great story – sensual and intriguing – loved it!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Gracias for stopping by and commenting.
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A great little tale skilfully told. Nice one.
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Thanks Keith.
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Querida Tracey,
I’m happy to see the doctor is in. 😀 It seems they’re both caught in the web. ¡Qué bien escribido! Nope, you haven’t lost it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Gracias amiga.
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Seems to me they’re enjoying their self-made trap 🙂
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Yes, indeed. Thank you for dropping in Linda.
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Love ely little story Tracey.
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Thank you Dan.
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You’ve painted a picture of a highly-charged liaison that can only end with an explosion! I love the way you describe it with all its textures and tensions: such well chosen words. In fact, Tracey, it’s all woven together perfectly!
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Thank you Sarah. I guess my tangled words worked today. Yes, I feel an explosion coming on also. I hope they enjoy the ride.
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Ha.. in the end I think they enjoy both the be captor and captive….
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Ahhh … the tangled web being woven. I like this. It’s intriguing and mysterious. I want to know
more about it all. Perhaps, by the end of the bottle great secrets will be revealed.
Bein venida otra vez al campo de las historias. Me puede traer una tequila, por favor. Mmmm … que rico!!!
Abrazos de Florida ..
Isadora 😎
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Estoy contento de estar de vuelta escribiendo. Gracias por pasar por mi mundo. Realmente no bebo mucho tequila.
Abrazo,
Tracey
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I have a feeling it won’t end well for either of them. Those are beautiful pictures. Welcome back. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you Patricia. Yes, Love is messy for La Señora.
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